So, when are you gonna write about your firing. Put another way, Franz and you are both mostly unemployed, so what’s holding you back? Franz has worked up a case of Herpes Simplex ABCDEFG to show for his joblessness.
Regardless of author’s intention, the object/subject is NOT the person, but an inanimate object. However, missed opportunity. Good cinematography, interesting female face, but unfortunately second character (camera) has no voice, lacks soul. Either ditch the camera concept and concentrate on the young lady or give the camera some much needed soul and only then can you consider this short clip a complete thought. Right now it looks like an idea that was aborted at the hands of a person who knows better.
To infuse this dead character with the breath of life in such a short time requires imagination. You have it, so get to work!
I’m with Alex. I’m waiting to hear how you fought Corporate America and got caught holding Luddite seances in the backroom or whatever idealistic and righteous Apple policy violation brought down the wrath of Jobs.
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6 May 2008 at 1:30 pm
So, when are you gonna write about your firing. Put another way, Franz and you are both mostly unemployed, so what’s holding you back? Franz has worked up a case of Herpes Simplex ABCDEFG to show for his joblessness.
6 May 2008 at 1:40 pm
Regardless of author’s intention, the object/subject is NOT the person, but an inanimate object. However, missed opportunity. Good cinematography, interesting female face, but unfortunately second character (camera) has no voice, lacks soul. Either ditch the camera concept and concentrate on the young lady or give the camera some much needed soul and only then can you consider this short clip a complete thought. Right now it looks like an idea that was aborted at the hands of a person who knows better.
To infuse this dead character with the breath of life in such a short time requires imagination. You have it, so get to work!
Sincerely,
Thought Becomes Flesh
6 May 2008 at 1:43 pm
Oops! I retake everything! Since you are not the author, everything DOES NOT APPLY!
7 May 2008 at 1:31 am
I’m with Alex. I’m waiting to hear how you fought Corporate America and got caught holding Luddite seances in the backroom or whatever idealistic and righteous Apple policy violation brought down the wrath of Jobs.
7 May 2008 at 3:50 pm
one of my housemates is unemployed, and so is dan now too. im just following the crowd on this one.
21 February 2012 at 2:22 am
omg! can’t imagine how fast time pass, after August, ber months time already and Setempber is the first Christmas season in my place, I really love it! 985033